While I appreciated the vivid descriptions, and found myself terribly annoyed by a 12 yr old that I never met, I found myself speed reading through your post LOOKING FOR THE REASON WHY YOU WERE IN THE E.R.!!!!!!
Are you both okay? Jeez. People worry!
Posted by moonandsun03 at July 13, 2007 12:22 PMYeah! What SHE said!
And oh what sympathy/empathy you have... *snicker* I would have been exactly the same.... ALSO noticing him not washing his hands and being totally disgusted by that, giving him a really nasty look. heh.
Posted by Keri at July 13, 2007 03:32 PMI had to laugh when I did a strange take on this sentence: "The germs, you know, they cause infections and shit."
Germs shit?
Posted by Joel at July 13, 2007 08:24 PMGood writing, right on the edge. I'll bet it was much fun to write as it was to read.
Posted by Kyle at July 15, 2007 03:58 AMI liked the happy ending.
Posted by Anji at July 15, 2007 11:01 AMVery well written. It really painted a picture for me.
Posted by Vito at July 16, 2007 04:10 PMWaiting rooms are terrible and hospital ER's are the worst!
Posted by daisy at July 18, 2007 08:56 AM